![]() Quiet could be used in a positive manner, highlighting the lack of noise if the character needs things to be silent. If you want to highlight how the river sounds, describing it as quiet will help your reader imagine the lack of noise and imagine water moving smoothly, without anything in its way. “He was surprised at how quiet the river was considering how loud the storm was the night before.” How it Adds Description “The river was so quiet you could hear the dewdrops falling from the leaves.” Think of the image a shattered window or mirror has disturbing a still river would have the same effect. You could also use still to describe a river before something has shattered the stillness, making the event that much more impressive. You can use it to describe a river that has no movement or if you want your characters to be able to see what’s beneath the water’s surface. Still suggests a body of water that is flat, like glass. ![]() “The still river reflected his image back at him.” How it Adds Description “The river was so still that she could see the fish moving beneath the surface.” Maybe your character is nervous or scared if you have them visit or come across a serene river, they may immediately feel at ease and able to handle whatever situation they find themselves in. Serene is best used when comparing the river to something wild and frayed because it creates an image of a setting so peaceful that it calms everything around it. “Travelling on the serene river was a breeze compared to the tumultuous storm at sea.” How it Adds Description “The serene river made him feel at ease.” ![]() Use tranquil if you want your reader to imagine the river as perfect and picturesque. The word tranquil suggests that the river is peaceful and calm, almost heavenly: the water moves swiftly but easily along the banks, maybe there are birds chirping sweetly and the sun is shining brightly. “The tranquil river flowed effortlessly along its banks.” How it Adds Description “She gazed out at the tranquil river, feeling its peace and stillness within her.” ![]()
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